Black and White Photographing a Dancer

Discussion in 'Post Your Photos' started by Jean Paul, Sep 18, 2021.

  1. Jean Paul

    Jean Paul New Member

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    This is my first time Photographing a Dancer/Model during my Photography Course, I wanted to share the photos with you and to have some feedback and ways to improve from all of you.

    Canon EOS R5
    Canon EF 17-35mm

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  2. GDN

    GDN Well-Known Member

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    My two cents worth.

    I like number one.
    Number two, maybe crop a little so the model is a little more centered.
    Number three, I like.
    Number four, the model looks un-natural, an with her looking in another direction doesn't help.
    And I like the last one.

    I think that you have done well here.

    Gary
     
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    Craig Sherriff Well-Known Member Site Supporter

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  4. Jean Paul

    Jean Paul New Member

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    Thank you very much for the feedback!
     
  5. Jean Paul

    Jean Paul New Member

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    Thanks Craig!
     

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